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so i was wondering if i could use your advice?out of the poems that i have up on here which do you think are my best three? two? or even just one?
any advice you can spare would be grrreatly appreciated!
You Saved MeAt the start of this story I was a broken man With a broken heart, a broken soul, broken plan I left life, it was over, thoughts of death would keep me sober Never able to fly high again I'm love-less like an ogre I thought I found my one true love and I called her my princess Her smile, her heart, her mind, her soul all of these were priceless She stopped my heart and left me for dead, thinking its something I said I almost vanished without a trace but you saved me instead!You Saved Me
Nadiah I love you, I love you Nadiah I'm so in love with you!
I asked the worldI asked the world to stop, stop making me run, stop making me wonder why, stop making me hold the gun, stop making me want to die.I asked the world
and three voices answered back, in a tone that was strong and clear, they said: you will live under my rule, you will live in this fear!" and I replied: "who are you to dictate how my life should be lived?" and the voices said: I am the law almighty, political leaders all powerfull, - fools."
I asked: "what makes you so special? you look the same as I."
the law almighty said: "I keep ord
Me
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shattered dreams and unheard screams are what this world is built on
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I demand you listen to dir en grey
life's a b****...so is everything else.
if you want to meet me,look in the gun store.and if I'm not there,just watch the news
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in defence of vi-o-lence is evidence to the truth
if the truth will set you free freedom is found with the proof
but wheres the proof?
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in defence of vi-o-lence is evidence to the truth
if the truth will set you free freedom is found with the proof
but wheres the proof?
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